One
Small,
Precise,
Poetic,
Spiraling mixture:
Math plus poetry yields the Fib.
What’s that, you ask? That’s the very first Fib I wrote. What’s a Fib? Well, first a little backstory….
At the 2005 SCBWI-LA Writer’s Day, poet-novelist Ron Koertge mentioned the idea of “warming up” each day by writing haiku. To paraphrase what he said, writing haiku keeps you in tune with the importance of word choice and how you can say so much with so little… with the goal being that subconsciously you will continue to be aware of both points whenever and whatever you write.
I was intrigued, but my geeky mind immediately began to churn. Why just haiku? I wanted something that required more precision. That led me to a six line, 20 syllable poem with a syllable count by line of 1/1/2/3/5/8 – the classic Fibonacci sequence. In short, start with 0 and 1, add them together to get your next number, then keep adding the last two numbers together for your next one. It’s a wonderful sequence, and it’s one that is repeated in nature (most famously in nautilus shells). Heck, some folks use it in knitting and music,… and, as much as I’d like to say I invented a new form of poetry, these sequences have been part of various poetic structures since before Fibonacci’s time. However, "the Fib" is my take on the idea, complete with a wicked cool name, if I say so myself.
I’ve found writing Fibs helpful, as they really do make me conscious of word choice in everything I write (which is particularly critical in my poetry, picture book manuscripts, and e-mails to Mom). Also, I’ve found kids respond well to the form, especially when they hear that “Ewww. Worms.” can be 1/3 of their poem. So, I think it’s time for the Fib to gain more exposure.
In another post, I’ll talk more about various Fib rules and guidelines and subsets (like Fibs that tell fibs!), but for now, I’m curious to hear what you think or see if any of you want to try your hand at writing Fibs … and hoping you all want to join me in spreading Fibbery around the web/in classrooms/wherever.
This
Post
Is now
Completed,
So, I gotta book.
See you all on the comments page.
(There are wonderful Fibs in the comments here, and if you look to the right you'll find links to other posts with even more Fibbery (such as the post cleverly named More Fibbery.) If you head on up to the top of the blog you'll find new Fibbish links, too. In short, feel free to poke around... and don't be shy about telling a Fib or two.)
(And now another update: a book deal (and that's no fib!))
(The BIG update: The 14 Fibs of Gregory K. - the novel that came to life because of this post - is now available wherever books are sold!)
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You’ll answer
Pink Floyd’s great question:
Is there anybody out there?
Yup! Found you from your Fuse#8 comment....I don't blog so I can't link....but you are now on my "Favorite Blogs" to check each day. Need to get a coffee to sit and get to know you - your've written so much and I have arrived at the party a little late!
(not a blogger, but hopefully not a lurker....what else can I be?)
pink
rocks!
you are
my favorite wordsmith.
(Fibs, however, are not worthy)
What else can you be? Participant! (Hmmm, I coulda written this as a Fib, but I haven't had my coffee yet, either). Welcome to the blog and come back anon, anon.
And hello anonymous2 (electric boogaloo). You have a fantastic start to a Fib, and even though your syllables start to veer off the path of 112358ishness, I so love your sentiment that I don't mind. Thanks for the comment!
Hi
Cuz
Tres cool
This will be
Most fun to try with
Jess, the verbal wordsmith at home.
Must stop now and get some work done before kids wake up.
Amazing (to me) people saw your site in the first hours after posting (must be night owls).
see you at Passover, xoxo L.
Not enough coffee yet to try a fib, but must stop in to say "very cool"
Should
All
Comments
Be written
In the form of Fibs?
Enquiring minds would like to know.
Nah, all comments needn't be Fibbish. They can be, of course, as I'd love to see a body of Fibbery built up, but I'm interested in anything folks have to say about the Fib in concept, in practice, or in spreadability.
Wow!
I
Love this
Idea.
I always wanted
Permission to tell fibs in school.
GK......Have wasted at least an hour trying to compose an impressive FIBonesque masterpiece...with no luck.....sigh..
And duty now calls me elsewhere.....BUT I'll be back!
It's
tough..
Just two...
Even three..
But five?.. Eight?.. Enough!!
Thirteen I think I"ll try to do.
Would give me five more spaces to write down much more fluff!!
Impressed, GK ?? I won't tell you how much time that cost...gg..AND came out with rhyming scheme fatally flawed..... After I proudly wrapped it up, I noticed.......horrors.....I had failed to include the "three line."
My decision long ago not to risk my future on a career in writing ...writing anything....fully vindicated!
By the way, I am a frequent user of Fibonnacis in analyzing stock trends...a snap compared to what you're now introducing. And besides, made even simpler by using my trusty old calculator......
George,
make
my day
say you want
to retire away
from all those hacks on the beltway
deep in the brush in the hush of the discreet mesquites
to contemplate your legacy
nevermore to make
war on them
or us
or
rove
Whoa, Max. You've written actual POETRY there. Now, it's not a Fib as I'd defined it, but it's Fibonacci poetry (more specifically, in its stacked form. Tetractys is another short, stackable form, for those who care. When I start talking about my rules and guidelines... well, yours still will rock.
MC, that's also a fine effort! Mixing math in is a great idea. Probably a whole subset of Fibbery. Again, that line of 13 shows how hard it is to do a complete thought in 20 syllables... which I only point out cuz I really do use Fibs as I mentioned in my post. That said, I am LOVING that folks are writing here. MORE, I say!
Fib?
No,
No way-
Never I!
I would never lie.
Unless it was a little fib!
oooo word play
did i get it right?
I
hate
poets.
Really, I
want to kill them and
bathe in their warm blood and entrails.
[Just saw Slither last night....]
Word
Freaks
Like Fibs.
No surprise,
They've posted a few.
Any other Fib sightings yet?
Fibs Are Easy as Pi
Pi Day came;
i
took a deep breath
and
a circle i squared
then put a few remaining digits
aside
for my evening repast
(to be continued...)
Spike,
Blonde
Vampire.
Burned, smacked, chipped.
Nugatory much?
That's okay, we all still love you.
Funny and interesting... I used to write haiku's for my dog, until she became very irritated by them and would leave the room, scowling back at me on the way out....then I realized I was being sacrilegious because it was too many worship words in one sequence. All dogs are theologic literalists, I think.
Here is a Fib for a canine....
Walk
Park
Cookie
Wanna play?
Go fetch your frisbee
Gonna take a ride to the beach
Mad.
Excellent Fibbery here today. Jessie, you did get it right. Jim, I only play a poet on my blog, so go after that Max Entropy character, as THAT is a poet. And I love writing poetry for pets. Thanks to all who posted comments today. Let's see what tomorrow brings....
Disclosure
I'm
no
poet;
i only
play one on teevee
so write me a screenplay would you?
Spec
Script
For sale!
Who's buying?
Please, Mr. Speilberg...
Mr. Cameron.... Anyone?
wake
up
sunny
sweet relief
from bitter winter
dark days conduit renewal
As a former engineering major and math geek, but with a life-long interest in books and reading and poetry, I have to say that I do find fibs appealing.
In honor of the recent and unusual weather in Northern CA, here's my contribution:
Rain,
Rain,
More rain,
Slate gray skies,
Sullen and squall-filled.
All I ask is to see blue sky.
Not high art, but it did make me feel a little better.
Thanks also for the feedback on Frank Asch's books. Anything that makes a link for reluctant readers is good news to me!
Spring
back,
they said...
or forward ??
As I lie in bed,
I think best to wait a bit and listen for a bird!
GK..Sorry to subject you to this monstrosity.....Determined to make a "contribution"..!!??
Oh
Cool
How neat!
I have to
teach this to my kids
Who are not poets yet but like math!
Thanks for a great post! I found you through the carnival and I'll be back!
As promised, I have put up a post with some rules and guidelines and subsets. Though as I say there, the key thing is simply to WRITE. And to send me cookies, of course. Or any chocolate.
I
Fib
You Fib
We all Fib.
What I want to know
Is how do I get some ice cream?
Whole
notes
delay
full measure.
Procrastinating
hemidemisemiquaver!
In a mathematical vein:-
grad
div
vector
partial
Laplacian, maths
differential application
This
Fib
Has one
Mistake, that
It does not really
Have any mistakes at all!
Math,
Makes,
My head,
Quake with pain.
Writing a poem based
On Fibonacci, does the same.
__
Write My Essay
These
Poems:
Truly
Pedantic
Methodology.
Extremely restrictive process.
Not directly related to Fibonacci, however two years ago I wrote a poetry book entitled "Algoritmi" (is in Italian...), all related to computer science, from hard disks to Turing' theorem.
I've
never
been much
good at this,
but here's my feeble
attempt at writing a Fib. Hmm.
An excellent idea, and there are some really impressive Fibs here. Keep it up!
Pi.
Pie.
The same?
Different?
One is infinite,
The other is pastry covered.
Nice poetry format, but way too hard to write!
Dead
Man's
Millions
4-1-9
Desperate spammer
African dictator's wife
Blood,
Sweat,
And tears,
Made this Fib.
And for what purpose?
Just a fanciful waste of time,
Procrastination is a wonderful friend to me!
Is an '-ion' suffix considered 1 or 2 syllables? I'm assuming 1...if it is considered 2 then substitute 'wonderful' with 'special' or similar ;)
I
for
one welcome
our slashdot overlords
:)
new poetic form:
the spiral sequence unfolds
recombining genes.
this
is
far more
geeky than
another haiku.
Shit
is
what you
make of it.
Try to avoid it.
If not, clean up the mess you make.
Who?
Who?
I ask.
Would write Fibs?
Not he, she, or we.
Just I can not stop trying to.
Hands, stop continuing to type in longer word strings!
one,
one,
two seeds,
three more in
the next, neat row,
together chasing the sun.
I taught a guy how to write a recursive function in C to calculate the Fib sequence just the other day...
Those
are
the best
twenty beats
I have ever seen
in the name of Fibonacci.
Short
One.
- yes
- no
- maybe
- that is all
- the only choices
- more than to be or not to be
- less than the multiple choice test we took yesterday
- binary versus trinary versus quadrinary is the current great debate
- where will you stand when the choice comes for you? with tested binary, new but simlar trinary, or with funky 4d quadrinary
One
One
Two more
And then three
At five syllables -
almost done. Eight for the finish
They
come
in great
masses now
You are slashdoted
Enjoy more fibs than expected
:)
Tool's James Maynard Keenan did this on Lateralus (the song) on Lateralus (the album) in 2001.
The sequence here is by the syllables in the words (not the words themselves).
The phrasing of how it is sung highlights the sequence.
The opening lyrics are:
black
then
white are
all I see
in my infancy
red and yellow then came to be
reaching out to me
let's me see
ooohh...
Sing
Me
A song,
A perfect
Rhythmic analogue
Of a Fibonacci sequence.
Life
Love
Have they
Fled from me?
And will they return?
And can I bear the solitude?
Is
My
Penis
Big Enough
Or Do I Need To
Consider Plastic Surgery?
So
Long
and Thanks
for all the
Fish, our dear Douglas.
Such shame, in the scheme of things,
forty-two is not in the Fibonacci sequence.
cold.
dark.
alone.
Excellent!
This nerdy form
can still be totally emo
A
Fib
Newly
Attempted:
Mood siesta now
Fibonacci laughing aloud!
Poets would love this: a song that any professor
Would listen to and approve sure
And, the studious
Write now a…
Poem!
A
Fib!
Palindrome version. (It's early, best I could do...)
God,
all!
It's fib,
version A.
Edit idea...
No! Is rev B, if still a dog.
Fake Palindrome version just for grins...
I
See
Can o'
bi "F-words".
Back till EPS
spell it backwards - fibonacci
- Ed P. Smith (EPS)
Hey -- this is really cool. I'm an English teacher and plan to try this with my students -- how should I credit you?
This
form
forces
fine feelings
into abstruse lines
each longer longing to affix
a meaning to creations made live by febrile minds
and for this new spring trick I thank both you and SlashDot. Well done. Though if continued cumbersome.
Hare.
Hare.
They mate.
Now there's three.
Mate again, now five.
And again, now there's eight bunnies.
[Now thirteen bunnies, and counting. Mom will be pissed off.]
On the Scifaiku list we have been enjoying these for years on such subjects as alien coded transmissions.
Ok, here's my attempt...
A
Pen
It falls
And forms words
It bleeds, constant and continuous
A mark upon a perfect sheet of white
Tim
Rest.
Sleep.
Awake.
It's nap time.
I need to sleep in.
Is it Saturday morning yet?
the fibonacci sequence is also the foundation of how apparel is sized (called "grading"). The rules governing grading practices are based on the sequence.
We!
Are!
Your Friends!
You'll never
be alone again! Well come on!
Why?
Why?
Would You
Write a poem
Having syllables
Matching Fibonacci's Numbers?
I can only think that there is something wrong with you!
Peace,
Love,
Yogurt,
Granola:
The hippie credo.
It helps me recall the 60's.
un
jour
encore
et toujours
à passer ici
cet endroit m'ennuie et m'endort
je ne pense qu'à le fuir car le travail m'abrutit
...and its translation:
one
day
again
forever
I got to spend here
this place is boring and sleepy
Dreaming about getting out because work alienates
hi from France,
deep
Place
Seed
In soil.
Add water.
Wait for a few days.
Germination turns seed to sprout.
deep
love
delights
my senses
as the subtle light
that unveils your spiritual grace
Why?
How?
Easy.
Just start slow
Add a few more words
Then, sir, you have yourself a Fib
Can
I
write a
good poem
with this structuring
or is it too hard to construct
Hullo. Here via livejournal.
There
Is
Nothing
For those who
Refuse delusions
Of joy; but pain, spite unending.
I loved making it far more than I like making haikus. Thanks for the creation.
1/1/2/3/5/8
HALT!
HALT!
Oh no!
A riddle
that cannot be solved.
Burn in hell vile halting problem!
for
God
so loved
this sick world
that He sent His Son
who died, that we might become clean
and lives forever, that we might be saved from God's wrath
anyone wrote a program to write a fib ?
Poor
Fib.
A poet,
And didn't know it.
black,
blue,
yellow,
magenta,
these are the colors
that printers find are best combind.
This is very interesting - even for an architect. The Fibonnachi sequence is actually one of many types of formal grammer or 'linquistic architectures' also known as a Lindenmayer system. This idea could spark a myriad of new compositional aestetics.
I
Write
A Fib.
Must I wash
Off my hands with soap?
Better than a spoken Fib, eh?
We go,
sometimes,
down to the park
to feed the ducks some bread
but when we run out of food they get mad
2/2/4/6/10
Its still a fib =]
-nexxuz
Just
My
Humble
Addition
To a strange new form.
More intruiging than other prose
But I think you should admit one more line for effect.
Is
This
New form
Some kind of
New English haiku
Or is it universal (math)?
In
Self
Ref'rence
I will spend
This space because it's
Math and math just loves itself so.
To
Make
A Fib:
Boil two
quarts water and add
some words. Is it al dente yet?
Her
heart
beating,
I felt truth
in the soft rhythm,
I toiled with grace and purity.
Immortality, it seams, takes refuge in numbers.
Ah!
Look!
How strange.
A graph grows
On the line edges
It looks vaguely exponential
(Of course I know it's not, how could it be? But still, Look!)
Baby Fib
(in honor of my sister who's first baby is due today)
now?
soon?
baby
anytime.
excited fam, friends
don't mean to bug you but...still do!
A fib 404 message in the public domain:
This
Page
Is not.
404
You'll find nothing here
You'd better just click "back"-- move on.
who's?
whose.
(yes, mine)
please ignore
my grammer error
in my previous post, dammit.
one
hard,
rocking,
pulsing beat
brings me to my feet
leads me to what Ive forgotten
pristine in reccolection but now smells all rotten
I see the beach, i see the trees, i smell the sea and feel sand on my knees but i know
Deep down I know but do you? the world isnt round and the sky isnt blue, the schools are not safe and the air is not clean, the news isnt true
so what do we do… Let the old boys club dictate how its run, liberate a nation
hurt them for fun. desensitized to fear, blood and pain
But it doesnt look like they won
the world is not dumb
complacent
maybe
so
sad
-- quoted from brainpron.net
I
want
to be
all the things
my mother said I
couldn't be in my own life time.
you
I
would think
that I'd learn--
grammar with two A's!
hasty perfectionist...slow down.
Write
Line
By Line
Poetry
It’s Fibonacci
Mathematical Syllables
need
one
hour
to compose
an impressive fib
to rival all, with no luck, sigh...
thanx, mc, you had one there....
Hey
I
posted
a nice fib
where the hell is it?
oh
say
can you
see any
bedbugs on me? Dumb
songs seem to live longer than most
real poems. Why do I recall that but not true prose?
Saw
Fibs
On a
Site I love
Now I'm stuck fibbing
And I can't seem to stop at all.
I'm
not
really
qualified
to wrangle numbers
to or to comment on perfection
dust
clot
gathers.
my keyboard
is like a desert.
the oasis is the off switch.
Excellent idea! In response --
3 Consider
1 Pi:
4 That delightful
1 Thing --
5 The ratio of
9 Circumference to diameter
I have long appreciated the benefits of writing within rigorous boundaries.
http://99words.livejournal.com/
Wait...
No!
Haiku,
Senryu,
Are not congruent!
(Practice poetic pedantry!)
Fibs,
form?
content?
All should have
element from set
of all possible math concepts.
For
Us
Strange, odd
People who
Like to play with words,
Fibs are a perfect time-waster!
This should keep my family busy for weeks - thanks!
CarynW
tick
tock
moving
slower; now
time is standing still
while I wait for you to join me
take this bitter pill
from me now
fleeting;
locks
click
1 I
1 Think
2 to try
3 a long Fib
5 of epic wording
8 meta-syntactic self-ref'rence
13 is it too much to do in this way of self-rev'rence?
21 one word upon the next upon the sum of words to carry the text upon the Fib
34 The challenge, they say, is in the choice of words when given so few or strict a guide on which to place the words that must follow the sequence of Fib
55 But now does this even qualify as poetry as aesthetic as beauty or as only an exercise in numbers and letters and sounds and phoenems reaching and reaching to be heard by someone with nothing else to do
89 And now as the Fibonachi sequence explodes above a hundred, my Fib crumbles on its last line and thought or will and testament with a sigh or a gasp the deed is done and is nothing but on the page to sit and wollow in a joyous agony of an undead state of completion and of no relief to ever be completele and gone from all minds
That became kind of unintentionally morbid...sorry. I also feel I've somehow cheated...if you pronounce reference and reverence as three syllables, remove "self-"?
Why
does
Dubya
keep lying
Even though we have found him out?
Why
does
Dubya
keep slinging
Bulls*it on Iraq
Even though we have found him out?
William Shatner would be proud...
I
am
not so
wonderful
as a manager.
my skills need some development.
I was once a geek,
that was cake
compared
to
this.
This idea is awesome - I'm going to be putting a lot up on a friend's online newspaper (my name is linked, but I'm not sure about the advertising policy here so no in-text link) on the next update, linking back here and giving credit of course. Here are the ones I've got so far:
This
is
a Fib.
Not a lie.
A poem made of
The great Fibbonacci sequence.
Yet
again
I try
to make a
passable poem.
I hope this one wasn't too bad.
Now
for
something
completely
different. I will
Attempt to make a longer Fib.
Thirteen on this line! Can I one-up this? I think so!
So
I
will try
an even
longer Fib poem.
Eight syllables are on this line!
Can you tell that I'm running out of good ideas?
Not that, I suppose, any of the ideas were good to begin with. TWENTY-ONE!
Now
the
true test.
Can I write
A Fib that isn't
completely self-referential?
Now!
Go!
Escape
to freedom!
We are trapped in this.
Run, try to fly, and soar so far.
Only to fall back,
receeding
into
this
void.
Oh
my
brain hurts
and it is
too late to play this
game. Help me !
I'm off
to
bed !
Did I get that right ? Words are my thing, not numbers !! Chicken Spaghetti sent me here...
A
Rose
Is red
Violet blue
And isn't math cool
look
found
great page
to look at
you admire this work
while you sit at your cubicle
one
more
season
biking and
eating tacos with
friends on the TNR bike ride!
TNR Stands for the Thursday Night Ride!
George
Bush,
you seek
to destroy
civil liberties
while pandering to the right-wing.
A
New
Meter
Poetic.
These words pathetic
Pay homage to Fib aesthetic.
Fib
O
Nacci
Sequence fun.
Find the golden mean
As the ratio converges.
Spock...
Bones...
Scotty...
Uhura!
Must. Get. Shields! Back. Up.
Lungs. Constricting. No time! To. Move.
Fantastic! And there's Fibbing all over the Web. Here's today's post with links to some places where Fibbery has been spotted.
Fibs
Live!
Hooray!
haiku is old hat.
fibonacci is more fun!
form without limit
start
small,
adding
syllables
as needed to make:
fibbinoci based poetry
oops. That last fib should have said:
start
small,
adding
syllables
as needed to make:
fibbinoci based poetry
(even if fibonacci gets spelled incorrectly)
God?
Yes
It's me
I know, son
Will I see you soon?
Not before you finish your work
That's a relief - do you think it's going well so far?
You asked for wisdom, you asked to be helpful - so far you've done well. Don't forget the love...
I
have
trouble
with Haiku
but Fibonacci
is a format this geek can grok.
i wrote one of these years ago,,a bit longer though
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
poem for fibonacci
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
...
fold,
change,
construct
it molds you
your eyes won't open
your movements can not change it's shape
your thoughts can not help but to mimic it's symmetry
it is beyond your time to see it unfolding like a flower to greet the new dawn
slowly releasing petal after petal of coded information into the fluxus state of temporal reality's spiral
Comes
Falls
Away
Infinite
Once touched turns to mist
Will we encounter it again?
Time crashes past with whirring noise
Or slips silently
But we’ll see
One day
Soon
Life
Light
Peace
Healing
Redemption
Time lost found again
Memories restored properly
We see the truth of who we were
And have all the time
In the world
And more
Soon
Home
This is
an alternative
to the normal fibbery:
Instead of two first lines of one syllable each,
this one starts with two syllables and continues with five in the second line.
Nice idea you think? Just go and try to count the syllables of this sixth line without getting completely dizzy in the head!
The
first
only one
the second is
one but the next is two then three
to five and eight and thirteen and to infinity…
I think this fits in the "fibbing Fib" category.
I call it "Egyptian River"
Thoughts;
Dreams.
Lustful
Fantasies.
Do you think of me?
Because I never think of you.
Bit of pop culture:
Coat.
Ears.
Tardis.
Time travel.
Golden light shines forth.
Ninth gives way to tenth. Fantastic!
Greg:
I posted 3 fibs here yesterday and i can't find any of them...were they removed for some reason? :(
I don't know about fibs being "more precise" than haiku--the classical haiku involves more than just counting syllables.
Nescient: Look here: http://gottabook.blogspot.com/2006/04/more-fibbery.html
oops.. that wasn't readable??
http://gottabook.blogspot.com
/2006/04/more-fibbery.html
For Max Entropy....
Dems,
Libs,
Cry cry
like children
who will not share toys
or adults who can not lose fair
Florida? Hanging chads? Impeach? Why? Clinton deceives.
What action was taken to punish fibbing receiver of extramarital sex?
First
time.
Awkward
and clumsy.
And painful for her.
The next time it was pure heaven.
yes
no
mabye
our sins sent
Jesus to the cross
and Judas was a loyal friend.
We now seek to know "what is truth?"
A new plot twist! Has anybody asked Jesus yet?
it
used
to be
avant-garde
this malice for bush
there was a time when it was news
but now please do try
think harder
for your
black
sheep
-World
-is
-warming.
-We must stop
-polluting it so.
-Switch to cleaner sources for fuel.
-Conserve, recycle, and reuse are ways we can help.
-If not us, who will save it then?
-Not our children for
-it will be
-surely
-too
-late.
Great idea. here's a geometric poem
Why?
Why?
I ask:
Would we try?
Making poems from math.
What a silly idea, that.
But then again, maybe it's really quite fun to try.
The problem, I suppose, is that the sentences have a way of getting really long.
I guess if you are sufficiently geekly, though, one might forgive such a minor problem and revel in the hugeness of what then results.
I mean, seriously, though, at some point it gets really long and we have some sort of problem properly displaying: should I indent the subsequent “lines” as this single line wraps, or trust that people understand what I meant?
What is this
?
no
this ain't no fib
but
count the syllables
can you see me weaving the pattern?
not hard
if you know what you are
looking, staring at
(can you tell
i'm from israel?)
Hey, that was easy! Now for e^x...
You,
Cuz,
Amaze
and excite
thousands of people!
Congrats and keep up the good work!
Nice job, Kelly!
Hid your Fib out in the open and not one reader noticed it.
If a fib can be hidden so easily, is it really poetry? What is prose?
I
must
admit,
it is fun.
Moreover, it can
be more than somewhat addictive.
I
Think
I'll try
A short Fib,
I'm telling the truth.
Don't believe me? I just wrote it!
Uhm...
Where...
I mean...
Which one is...
What I meant was, why...
Oh nevermind, this is too hard.
Kinda lame, I know...but dang this is fun.
Pool.
Yard.
My room.
The garbage.
Oh to hell with it!
I'm running away...I hate chores!
I
can't
stop this
thing inside
it wants to get out
no reason to hide from the Fib
At the Pub, A Fib
Oh!
My!
Home I've
Forgotten.
My brain so sodden:
A call, my wife will soon arrive.
Whoa,
Freep.
That is
way too cool.
You are the father,
the father of Fibinocci.
Don’t let grand success inflate your big, fat hirsute head—
else we may be looking at a spectacularly hairy cranial explosion.
One
Two
Me, you.
Three and four --
Have we met before?
Eight: Great. Let's go out on a date.
Thirteen: Keen -- oops. Bummer. That's one unlucky number.
Twenty-one: Not much fun. But still, I could go on -- and go on, and go on, on, on, on...
I just finished by CrimLaw midterm, so here is one along those lines:
Crime
Pays.
A number
of lawyers agree;
not all are prosecutors.
"Crime
Pays,"
some say.
A number
of lawyers agree;
not all are prosecutors.
I was downstairs when...
I
read
the Times.
Wrote this fib.
So what do you think?
Should I try to write another?
My houseguest was upstairs when...
She
saw
herself
reflected
in the looking glass
and ran screaming from the bathroom.
Oh
Dear
Something
Seems to be
Crawling up my leg.
Fibonacci, you dirty dog!
fib
or
ad lib
can it be
that such measured lines
please extemporaneously?
apg
When
I
was young
I wanted
to prove a theorem
that brought fame and fortune to me
But
now
I am
near fifty
and I have found peace
and maybe a little lemma
Read!
Read!
Pick up
book and read!
Mississippi read!
Let's Stop Brunt of Joke Harrassment...
How
'bout
"fibbing"
in Billiards?
Here are the game rules:
Place the 1, 2, 3, 5, 8, and 13 balls on the table, racked in a triangle. Players shoot at the balls in sequence, like in 9-ball. However, since this is Fibonacci billiards, the 1 ball must be sunk twice. When a player sinks it the first time, that player gets to pull it back out and place the ball anywhere on the table before the next player takes a turn. (That player does not get to immediately shoot again.) This way the player who first sinks the 1 ball can use some strategy against the other player(s). After the 1 ball is sunk the second time, the game continues in sequence.
Bud,
stem,
and then
the petals...
soon a sunflower
joins the fibonacci parade.
Fib Obsessed:
Here's a start...seven lines
and rhyming is more taxing...
1.SLEEP
1.SNORE
2.DAD ROAR
3.MOMMY SAYS
5.OUT! BIG BED NO MORE
8.SNORING LEADS TO MARITAL WAR.
13.WOE IS ME. OFTEN SORE. TOO MANY NIGHTS ON THE FLOOR.
Perhaps you shouldn't try to write Fibonacci poems while listening to Fats Domino:
Ooh
Wee
Baby
Oo-oo-wee
Baby don’t you let
Ooh, don’t you let your dog bite me
BTW, your word verification for the moment is bwymovca -- is this a secret message to me to forget Broadway, and move to California?
Ah
bon...
Je ne suis
pas la première
personne qui a écrit un "Fib"
en la langue française. Cependant, je l'ai essayée!
(Oh well...I'm not the first person who wrote a "Fib" in French. However--I tried!)
Title: It's no "fib.."
MAY!
PLAY!
Nubou
Uematsu
In Chicagoland
www.play-symphony.com http://www.play-symphony.com
Oh
Oh
Freedom!
Ecstasy
Where poetry's path
Co-mingles betimes with sweet math
Spam Fibonacci Poetry
Stock
Buy
Invest
Dollar falls
Great portfolio
Education is not needed
My other comments
Here's a Fib that works only if you pronounce Porsche correctly -- Por-sha, not Porsch.
New
Car
Porsche
Yesterday.
Just can't wait until
September when we pick her up!
Sal-
u-
tations,
screenwriter
extra-ordinaire
Greg Pincus of Alley Cats Strike
I
dig
this stuff.
Fib concept
is now in my book
of poetic forms, so thank you!
And
my
friend rocks--
He saw this
blog and knew I would
have a blast playing with this form.
this
is
bullshit
however -
infectious, so thanks!
UAHU 196 COMENTARIOS INCREIBLE GOOD POST
In the spirit of neoporcupine's fib (then again, this might be a bit too spammy):
Need
Meds?
Lifestyle
drugs online.
Herbal Viagra,
Cialis Soft Tabs. Fast Discreet.
Ode to Caffeine
Give
Me
Coffee
to wake up.
This is the morning
I set out to conquer the world.
Drip
Drop
No mop
Rain won't stop
Holes in the rooftop
Soon we will have an indoor pool
Bread
with butter
is better
for tastebuds and soul
than unnatural margerine
GK, look what you've started!
Super concept. Hmmm, let's try...
-----------
now
dark
the cave
oppressive
revelation path
discoveries of fearful truth
deeply buried beneath petty pointless platitudes
-----------
In
your
Easter
bonnet with
all the frills upon
it, no chance it stays on your head.
An Easter Fib
Eggs
Peeps
Bunny
Where is the chocolate?
The big guy is gone and we live.
oops!
Forgot a line and revised a little.
Egg
Peep
Bunny
Chocolate
Full basket of sweet
The big guy is gone and we live.
Is
This
The best
Use of time?
Doubtless I could be
Better employed in Suduko
The
Time
Has come;
He is here.
Kalki Avatar
Merwan Sheriar Irani
The
Bar
Exam
Is known to
Daunt even the most
Assiduous young aspirant!
The
Bar
Exam
Is known to
Daunt even the most
Assiduous young aspirant!
That
you
would so
read this thing
and be moved by it
shows the simple power of words.
The
gift
that keeps
on giving--
document review!
Lord, please don't let it ever end!
No
Food
Today.
Our church is
Fasting for Darfur.
When will the world wake up to this?
Ahh!! Fibonacci and the golden ratio(1.618....) luv em, they are invariably found every where in nature..the way the flower petals are arranged, the number of cells in honeycomb,the number of seeds in a sunflower and yeah the way your body is designed....:) I call "em GOD'S OWN NUMBER'S...:)
Fib
one
plus one
the ram’s horn
curls equals two plus
one equals three a pentangle
eight plus five, thirteen, the morning glory vine coils out
tender green shoots breach sky more heat new light quick nautilus lays out slick chambers excrete
new calcium accretes its self, greater anteroom
the piglet’s tail winds ecstatic
suckling curls clockwork
flagella
beating
home
New
York
Times? Shit.
Something's born,
Says a Shakespeare guy
Who has quit writing poetry.
NADA FIB
Back
There,
Before
These lines, hides
No, essential, is;
And nonsense called progression.
So too beyond; we regress in
Numbers, grids, attempting wise
Rules on disorder, but
All comes, still, to
This:
HANROD
Yea
Whatever
What?
Write?
Today?
Something smart?
I don't think I can.
I'll come back tomorrow and ty.
Why not an italian Fib? as
io, 1
io 1
solo, 2 convergo 3
alla fragile 5
mera noia della vita, 8
vorrei ridestarmi in altro vero mondo 13
dove io, solo io, potessi calarmi in una pace infinita 21
If
I
Begin
Thinking LOVE
My heart opens wide
And I am full of God's pure light.
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